WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.
It steaming hot on the farm, but that didn't stop dad gathering all the sheep so we can sheer them. Dad also bought out the barking circus, the dogs. They were great and good to train. Sweet birds we tweeting and it was time for breakfast and I had a bowl of cornflakes and toast spread with jam. It was hours later after breakfast and there were jobs to do. I had to feed the goats and milk the cow and shave the sheep so we could get wool. I had to spread it out on the table. After all the work was done we had some milkshakes and had some sandwiches for a little snack.
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