Wednesday, 19 September 2012

Dans Days Saturday 11-1/2

In todays chapter Dan had his first gig and Mum couldn't come. Mum couldn’t come to his gig because she did not feel well. So Dan was upset. That his two sisters did something for him. When his big sister got back from her morning Job she brought him home some fruit and nut energy bars. That night Dan perform his first gig. His first  song what not that good. his second song sounded better and his last song was great .

1 comment:

Rebekah said...

Wow rave I really love your picture and keep up the good work!I love your little sentence and I love the way you added that beautiful picture and with great style!I hope you love your picture and love the way you wrote that beautiful sentence!

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