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Monday 10 November 2014

Writing Test Good Friends 2014 - Unedited

Brainstorm: Good Friends!
Friendship
Reliable
Caring
Always there for you
Friendly
Trustworthy
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Intro: A good friend is a person that is there for you when you are feeling hurt or sad. A good friend is someone that is always there for you when you need them. Good friends should be really caring for you whenever you need them or when they need you.

Para 1: A good friend is someone that is always there when you need them. Good friends should always rely on you whenever you are doing anything with anyone. Good friends are people that should tell you the right decisions and should never tell you to make the wrong decisions.

Para 2: A good friend is someone that you need to trust and they need to trust you. If your friend is someone that treats you like you are nothing to them, they shouldn’t be your friend. You should have friends that be friendly to you and is never mean to you.  

Para 3: In friendship you need to have a friend that is trustworthy and kind. If you have a friend that is  to you, find a different person to be friends with. Your friends should be caring and reliable to you whenever you are feeling doubtful about anything.    

Para 4: Good friends are people that treat you like you are a good friend to them. A bad friend is a person that is just your friend because you are rich and they don’t care about you they just care about your money.  

Para 5: A good friend is someone that is there for you whenever you need them. If you are playing at the park and you see someone that is lonely, you should be a good friend and ask them if they want to come play with you. That is what a good friend does!

Para 6: Good friends are people that are loyal to you and your other friends. You can show that you are a good friendly person by showing them that you care about them and that you rely on them whenever they are doing something.

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